
Tanka VIII
Sate sun sunned by fun
till callous clouds caught up guts –
apt azure hatched falls
of foiled feelings moist stings sprawled;
marred mood tarred tool packed prunes punned.
’20:08:16:10:07
Note: of marred mood.
Life leads to many directions, ancestral trail leads you to the progenitors.

Tanka VIII
Sate sun sunned by fun
till callous clouds caught up guts –
apt azure hatched falls
of foiled feelings moist stings sprawled;
marred mood tarred tool packed prunes punned.
’20:08:16:10:07
Note: of marred mood.